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Post by bloodredtears on Dec 12, 2003 0:24:23 GMT -5

Peace

Calm waves
are lapping the sandy shore
the clouds
sit dormant in the sky
the muggy day
makes the water inviting
sun shines
keeping sorrows at bay

the easies way to forget your problems
is to sit and reflect in a quiet surrounding
just bundle them up
and let the water carry them away

Green grass
tickles my legs as I sit in the shade
a light breeze
makes the heat more bearable
Peace descends
and carries my worries away
peaceful solitude
brings rest to my wandering soul

** Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears

**Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

leash Guest	Peace Dec 12, 2003 0:39:44 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by leash on Dec 12, 2003 0:39:44 GMT -5 at first i was not able to visualize this tranquil place, but i read it a few times over and i began feeling the soft breezes tugging at me with the cool sand between my toes. very serene. i feel cleansed.

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Peace Dec 12, 2003 12:47:52 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Dec 12, 2003 12:47:52 GMT -5 thanks...i was writing this as it was all taking place of course...so its really easy for me to visualize it...the exact place to... i was at my cousin's in-law's house at the lake...i loved it there!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

Avatre Novice Just around for the words...^.^ Posts: 33	Peace Jan 8, 2004 16:25:52 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Avatre on Jan 8, 2004 16:25:52 GMT -5 Mmmm...I like the peace. My house has a lake near it so that's pretty cool. I don't think I could ever feel completely at peace...but it's close. nice poem
	~ Avatre

Todd Novice What if the Hokey Pokey really is what it's all about? D'OH! Posts: 45	Peace Jan 13, 2004 21:14:12 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Todd on Jan 13, 2004 21:14:12 GMT -5 Good poem.It makes for a nice read indeed.There's nothing like nature to take the mind off of all the crap in life. ~Strawberry Fields Forever~
	~Knowledge is the true organ of sight,not the eyes.~From the Panchatantra~

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Peace Jan 18, 2004 1:30:18 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Jan 18, 2004 1:30:18 GMT -5 This poem just draws you right into the setting, very nice.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Peace Jan 18, 2004 14:37:21 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Jan 18, 2004 14:37:21 GMT -5 thanks all!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

JosephScottMorris Apprentice Posts: 157	Peace Feb 26, 2004 15:29:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 26, 2004 15:29:56 GMT -5 Kristine, Indeed this draws the reader in to its settings, and that to me, takes a great writer.Excellent,keep writing! ;DJoe

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Post by leash on Dec 12, 2003 0:39:44 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Dec 12, 2003 12:47:52 GMT -5

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Post by Todd on Jan 13, 2004 21:14:12 GMT -5

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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 26, 2004 15:29:56 GMT -5