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Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 24, 2004 11:00:08 GMT -5
great job! this was great..
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 24, 2004 14:15:50 GMT -5
wonderful piece here joe...i really enjoyed it..and yes boy do we ever dream great job!
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 24, 2004 18:04:23 GMT -5
TJ, Thank you,I am glad you liked this one,it is my salute to all poets, both past and present, as well as to be. ;DJoe
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 24, 2004 18:07:10 GMT -5
Kristine, Thank you for the great review also! ;DJoe
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Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Feb 24, 2004 19:11:01 GMT -5
i liked this only
Transposed words had been chose, Words of beauty to that of a rose.
i felt the rhyme was forced in that. but otherwise, a fine poem.
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 24, 2004 20:56:13 GMT -5
Eclipse, Thank you for the good review. ;DJoe
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 24, 2004 21:00:33 GMT -5
A poet’s dream can shed light. Harmonic to natures delight.
I love those lines.
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 24, 2004 21:06:53 GMT -5
Silver Eyes, Thank you, I am honored to receive these Great reviews and glad you liked it also! ;DJoe
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Post by richie on Feb 25, 2004 14:16:35 GMT -5
excellent joe, we both it seams like dream poems regards Richard.
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 25, 2004 16:26:14 GMT -5
Richard, Thank for the great review and we all share dreams, I was inspired to write this poem from the heart, after readings of my favorite poet.This poem is published here in America and in Europe. And reviewed by friends in Canada and Russia as well.I am honored that you like this one! ;DJoe
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amberputis
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~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on Feb 26, 2004 0:03:07 GMT -5
fantastic, actually now im in the process of 'practicing' lucid dreaming, dreams interest me and it's just so crazy to think that beyond of what we know when awake, can be recognized in dreams, it boggles my mind! anyways great job here
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 26, 2004 7:16:37 GMT -5
Amber, Thank you, For the great review, and may we all have the best of dreams, for one another! ;DJoe
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sweetest17sin
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don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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Post by sweetest17sin on Mar 2, 2004 22:24:07 GMT -5
of course we dream! nice job!
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Mar 3, 2004 10:48:35 GMT -5
Melissa, Thank you for the great review as well! ;DJoe
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