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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 23, 2004 17:36:37 GMT -5
Stunning write and, unfortunately, all too true. I'd love to be that naive five year old again. Wonderful write.
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amberputis
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~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on Feb 23, 2004 19:07:10 GMT -5
yes, too, unfortunately true, but you expressed this wonderfully!
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Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 23, 2004 19:23:56 GMT -5
Hey, this one wasn't all that bad. I feel the raw truth in this poem. I can truly relate myself but,then again, so could we all....
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 24, 2004 0:36:12 GMT -5
another wonderful write, you sure no how to hit at societal issues...great job!
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Post by kronicdaze on Feb 24, 2004 18:00:41 GMT -5
Thank you all fa commentin...lata
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