Wolf
Apprentice
In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.
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Time II
Feb 18, 2004 1:44:47 GMT -5
Post by Wolf on Feb 18, 2004 1:44:47 GMT -5
Time II
Time, marching tirelessly on;
past empires already gone,
past the birth of many a planet,
past the powdering of hardened granite --
Existing before all,
to last beyond hade's fall;
wearing down the greatest stones,
overthrowing mighty thrones;
dimming even the searing sun
till the icy night has won --
Tireless, merciless, always marching on,
time will exist when all else is gone;
destroying all without mercy,
forever seeking, forever thirsty;
hunting endlessly for every more prey
which on finding does cruelly slay;
leaving all in icy ruin -
Behind, all the dead are strewn
contorted and bent in death,
slain by Time's icy breath --
And yet, there is the awesome certainty:
Time is but a part of endless eternity
© T. GhostWolf Davidson, October 7, 1967
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Time II
Feb 18, 2004 12:45:10 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Feb 18, 2004 12:45:10 GMT -5
another great piece...a little repetitious, but i suppose that was intended...these are my fav lines:
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Time II
Feb 18, 2004 13:34:27 GMT -5
Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 18, 2004 13:34:27 GMT -5
Repitition is a good thing at times. It is needed to restate the initial feel of the piece. Most times many people spend there whole poem restating there topic. Graet Job Wolf.
Tj
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Time II
Feb 19, 2004 18:31:54 GMT -5
Post by SilverEyes on Feb 19, 2004 18:31:54 GMT -5
I love the last two lines. Nice write.
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Time II
Feb 24, 2004 14:40:50 GMT -5
Post by John Barnett on Feb 24, 2004 14:40:50 GMT -5
Great job again.
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