Wolf
Apprentice
In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.
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America
Feb 17, 2004 21:03:24 GMT -5
Post by Wolf on Feb 17, 2004 21:03:24 GMT -5
This was written as an assignment in my speech class in high school in October of 1966. The assignment was to write a speech about the Viet Nam war. The following poem was the introduction I wrote; unfortunately, I no longer have the text of the speech which followed it.
Sadly, the poem has significance not only then, but through all of the years to this present day.
America
Wonder, O America, where your boys could be
wonder at the crying girls you see
wonder at the young brides dressed in black
O wonder, my America, at the caskets coming back
Look, O America, at your empty cities, towns
look at the somber mourning gowns
look for the young men gone to war
O look, my America, for their souls away soar
Feel, O America, all the heartaches and the pains
feel the dark and scarlet stains
feel the love your women lost
O feel, my America, the painful, dreadful cost
Pray, my America, for the young men gone and dead
pray for the brides they would have wed
pray for the loves so deep and true
Pray, my America, for they've been torn in two
Wonder, America, wonder; why they have to die --
and then, my America, cry.
© T. GhostWolf Davidson, October 12, 1966
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America
Feb 17, 2004 21:21:16 GMT -5
Post by SilverEyes on Feb 17, 2004 21:21:16 GMT -5
Unfortunately, this is the sad truth of America's wars and of all wars. I like the format and the execution of the piece. Nice write.
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amberputis
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~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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America
Feb 17, 2004 21:33:01 GMT -5
Post by amberputis on Feb 17, 2004 21:33:01 GMT -5
yes, true, it's very sad. But tell me, what's it like bein a teenager in the 60's? haha, i can only imagine, I'm a big fan of the 60's to tell you the truth.
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America
Feb 17, 2004 21:43:09 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Feb 17, 2004 21:43:09 GMT -5
that's so sad...it's so beautiful...and so true to our times and times past...this is wonderful...great job!
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America
Feb 23, 2004 1:29:36 GMT -5
Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 23, 2004 1:29:36 GMT -5
This is a great write,Thanks for sharing it! ;DJoe
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America
Feb 24, 2004 14:57:01 GMT -5
Post by John Barnett on Feb 24, 2004 14:57:01 GMT -5
Yes, thanks for sharing, excellent.
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America
Mar 1, 2004 20:06:12 GMT -5
Post by Burning Innocence on Mar 1, 2004 20:06:12 GMT -5
This is definately sad, especially with the outcome of Iraq. But I do have to say I am proud of the men and women that have gone in past and the ones that have gone in present. For what they did for us was to ensure OUR freedoms that many take for granted.
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America
Mar 2, 2004 15:20:30 GMT -5
Post by +Criminal Passion+ on Mar 2, 2004 15:20:30 GMT -5
Very disturbing... Beautifully written... and so true. I loved it,
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sweetest17sin
Virtuoso
don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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America
Mar 2, 2004 22:16:39 GMT -5
Post by sweetest17sin on Mar 2, 2004 22:16:39 GMT -5
this is an amazing poem. i know my generation doesnt know war the way past generations have, but the general message is still the same. its sad, really...the way the world is. nice job!
melissa!
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