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Post by amelie on Feb 13, 2004 0:35:40 GMT -5
Clarissa takes her palette and brush, And draws a picture of her life; A tiny rowboat at sunset, Under violet storm clouds, Rudderless and sinking.
A pale splash of light, Aquamarine and sapphire, Fringed around the lost, Little wooden hull; Her only hope, in face Of the darkness encroaching.
In her mind, she chases down Endless empty halls of Frosted mirrors, tantalising With offerings of hope that slide Away in effortless deception, Like ice across waxed glass.
This is what girls learn; That dreams are no more Substantial than a loveheart, Scribbled in the sand On a beach at low tide, To be washed away By the passage of the moon.
Down empty halls With frosted mirrors, Chasing the truth behind The illusions of her sex; On a beach at low tide, Stick in hand, sharing Her hapless dreams With an indifferent ocean; Or a lost rowboat at sunset, Desperate to outrun The approach of the tempest.
This little boat Will sail on somehow; She will not falter and drown, Or rock shut like a seashell, And spend her days in penance Beneath the barely rippling Surface of a silent rock pool; Among others that scuttle And cringe, seeking the shade.
Remember the fringe of light! It is the energy of lightning; Her salvation is in the thunder; She is a woman, after all.
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 13, 2004 0:56:46 GMT -5
Remember the fringe of light! It is the energy of lightning; Her salvation is in the thunder; She is a woman, after all. I love that stanza for all of it's strpmg feminity.
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 13, 2004 1:06:06 GMT -5
this is a great poem..it has a very deep meaning, especially as a woman who reads it...i especially loved this part sinking fits so perfectly...great job!
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Post by Persephone on Feb 13, 2004 4:54:51 GMT -5
Interesting piece.
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 23, 2004 1:41:46 GMT -5
Excellent write! ;DJoe
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Post by John Barnett on Feb 24, 2004 14:58:07 GMT -5
I enjoyed this piece, great job!
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