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Post by John Barnett on Feb 3, 2004 19:37:44 GMT -5
Life is an everchanging road to our destination The heart is the key element for any elevation We make mistakes and take wrongs turns We soar like eagles then crash and burn Through trials and wars, we become stronger We gain more scars and learn to fight longer It's about surviving the battle with your dignity And being a warrior during complete misery Each door we face is another opportunity Each hand we shake is a chance for unity Love and peace keep the world alive If we keep them in tact, we will survive But it takes a little knowledge for us to thrive And hatred will cause you to take a nose dive So choices are really the core of our souls They provoke the actions of all that we know So remember in life, when you are traveling a road Think of the possibilities that could come and go
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 3, 2004 19:56:09 GMT -5
A very inspirational piece and true too.
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 3, 2004 19:57:45 GMT -5
i really like this piece a lot...another very good write from you john...your style is so rhythmic..i love it...these are my fav lines i especially love the second because it reminds me of the poem by Tennysen about an eagle....great job!
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Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 4, 2004 2:54:33 GMT -5
Great job partner. This was a magnficent piece. Glad to see your back in the groove!!
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Post by John Barnett on Feb 4, 2004 11:58:59 GMT -5
Thank you guys, you really don't know how much it really means to me to read your kind comments. It's part of what keeps the muse alive inside of me. Thanks!
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