Avatre
Novice
Just around for the words...^.^
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Post by Avatre on Jan 14, 2004 20:48:55 GMT -5
Reflection
I look in the mirror at the happy face Yet salty blood on my tongue I still taste A hint of a bruise? A sign of a scar? Malice in the eyes is never far
Pretty eyes in the mirror stare back at me The pain and hurt only I can see Black eyes/White wings are beyond the frame Sometimes I wish to have never came
Black hair cascades in a black waterfall It may be time for help to call No longer can I brave this world alone The seeds of dissent have already been sown
Tanned skin unmarked but upon the wrist, a band One line of blood, circling the hand And underneath where the mirror doesn't show Lies the sorrow that no one will ever know
Pretty face, pretty eyes; but what of the hidden? Sometimes it shows through; shows up unbidden But not in the mirror; it lies to me When you look this way, what do you see?
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Post by SilverEyes on Jan 14, 2004 22:20:22 GMT -5
This has a lot of power and strength. It reminds me of a poem that I wrote a while back.
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Post by bloodredtears on Jan 15, 2004 9:08:16 GMT -5
that is a very good piece...very deep...i really enjoyed reading it!
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Post by Persephone on Jan 23, 2004 23:03:02 GMT -5
Interesting concept.
Welcome to the site.
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Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Jan 29, 2004 13:44:58 GMT -5
mm. really made me think. sounds like something i would have written about myself a couple months back. deep write. i really liked it.
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Post by John Barnett on Feb 24, 2004 14:25:08 GMT -5
This was great, I really enjoyed this. Very very good.
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