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amberputis
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wonders of the sky Dec 21, 2003 1:31:29 GMT -5

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Post by amberputis on Dec 21, 2003 1:31:29 GMT -5

If i could i would wander the sky,
I would kiss the clouds, and fly way up high.
I would watch the sun sink, and watch the moon rise.
As the stars would appear, i would swim to get near,
to admire these amazing things impossible to fear.
At these stars i would just gaze,
gaze for minutes...hours...maybe days.
If i could i would wander the sky.
I would explore the things most people pass by.

Amber

Persephone Guest	wonders of the sky Dec 21, 2003 8:09:08 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Persephone on Dec 21, 2003 8:09:08 GMT -5 Succinct but flows smoothly. Welcome to the site!

T.J. Barber Administrator Founder I would advise you to stay on my good side!!! Posts: 937	wonders of the sky Dec 24, 2003 16:26:41 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by T.J. Barber on Dec 24, 2003 16:26:41 GMT -5 Great job !! I enjoyed this incredible write. You are such a wonderful poet indeed. God Bless and Happy Holidays.
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SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	wonders of the sky Jan 14, 2004 19:00:55 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Jan 14, 2004 19:00:55 GMT -5 Beautiful. You know, I've always wanted to do that too.
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amberputis Virtuoso ~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~ Posts: 330	wonders of the sky Jan 15, 2004 23:53:14 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by amberputis on Jan 15, 2004 23:53:14 GMT -5 thanks so much for your comments, the simplest words of encouragment can easily brighten my day...
	Amber

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	wonders of the sky Jan 16, 2004 12:20:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Jan 16, 2004 12:20:47 GMT -5 i really enjoyed this poem...it was beautifully descriptive, but my favorite part was the last line, because it's so true that most people don't take the time to notice those things... great job!
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leash Guest	wonders of the sky Jan 19, 2004 16:24:41 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by leash on Jan 19, 2004 16:24:41 GMT -5 wonderful imagery. you can really get emotion through to the reader well. great job. welcome to poet club! hmm.. maybe this should be moved to the nature board?

Chaotic_Thetis Apprentice Bleed me! For i have witnessed yet remained silent.Slay me! For i had your love and kept it. Posts: 142	wonders of the sky Jan 27, 2004 14:15:12 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Chaotic_Thetis on Jan 27, 2004 14:15:12 GMT -5 Reminded me of several paintings surrealists invision at times. Lovely piece here, nice job ^_^
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Eclipse Apprentice It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time. Posts: 222	wonders of the sky Jan 29, 2004 13:37:30 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eclipse on Jan 29, 2004 13:37:30 GMT -5 interesting flow. ^.^ i enjoyed it.
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John Barnett Founders Founder Posts: 994	wonders of the sky Feb 24, 2004 14:24:16 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by John Barnett on Feb 24, 2004 14:24:16 GMT -5 This was very nicely written, great imagery. I love this.
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wonders of the sky

Post by amberputis on Dec 21, 2003 1:31:29 GMT -5

Post by Persephone on Dec 21, 2003 8:09:08 GMT -5

Post by T.J. Barber on Dec 24, 2003 16:26:41 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Jan 14, 2004 19:00:55 GMT -5

Post by amberputis on Jan 15, 2004 23:53:14 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Jan 16, 2004 12:20:47 GMT -5

Post by leash on Jan 19, 2004 16:24:41 GMT -5

Post by Chaotic_Thetis on Jan 27, 2004 14:15:12 GMT -5

Post by Eclipse on Jan 29, 2004 13:37:30 GMT -5

Post by John Barnett on Feb 24, 2004 14:24:16 GMT -5