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Post by bloodredtears on Dec 12, 2003 0:22:42 GMT -5
Life and Love
Life--
sitting here alone once again
Life--
never knowing what to say, or when
Life--
always waiting for that one chance
Life--
it's passing you by with no second glance
Life is the epitome of love
to love you must live
but to live you must love
so, question?
what is love if it can't exist
with out life
and...
what is life if it can't exist
with out love
Love--
knowing someone will be there
Love--
having someone who will always care
Love--
a shoulder upon which to cry
Love--
could it be an inconceivable lie
love and life
two scary emotions
tangled in a web of dreams
so, question?
is life just a dream
of having a true love
or...
is love just a dream
by which we live
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amberputis
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Post by amberputis on Dec 21, 2003 1:05:07 GMT -5
i really enjoyed this...i tend to question life and it's connection with love and dreams. It made me feel like there was a reasoning for questioning such, and I'm not the only one.
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Post by Persephone on Dec 21, 2003 8:12:44 GMT -5
Insightful and thought-provoking. =)
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Post by T.J. Barber on Dec 24, 2003 16:08:19 GMT -5
This was a truly great write. Your emotion was heart felt and sincere. Thank you for sharing this magnificant piece with us.
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Post by John Barnett on Jan 6, 2004 14:03:51 GMT -5
I like the format, it's very unique, very well done Kris.
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Post by bloodredtears on Jan 7, 2004 12:21:24 GMT -5
thanks everyone...i really appreciate all the feedback
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Post by SilverEyes on Jan 14, 2004 18:55:43 GMT -5
Whew, I almost drowned in the depth but I managed to survive. Anyway, very nice and definitely worth thinking about.
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Wolf
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In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.
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Post by Wolf on Feb 20, 2004 16:59:48 GMT -5
Good questions, BloodRedTears, and a very well done expression of those questions and the discomfort they raise... I've no answers, yet sense somehow that life - and love - are not only intertwined intimately as you've expressed, but encompass far more than either one apart or alone...
I cannot help but ponder the incredible poetry I've read here - and elsewhere - that expresses the beauty of a child's smile, or a spectacular storm, or the peaceful quietness of a forest...
Somehow, there has to be more than just the one, or the other, or the sum of the two...
Heh (wry smile); you've got me to thinking here, pondering the questions - and more...
Wolf
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Todd
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What if the Hokey Pokey really is what it's all about? D'OH!
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Post by Todd on Feb 21, 2004 19:17:16 GMT -5
Ahhh yes.....Thinking and wondering.It seems to me one can't be a poet without doing such.I like the unique style/format of this poem.A well done write!
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 23, 2004 1:07:26 GMT -5
Kristine, Great poem, I enjoyed reading it and thank you for sharing it! Interesting format, indeed, is life and love but a dream!  ;DJoe |
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