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Post by T.J. Barber on Jul 21, 2005 1:48:18 GMT -5
This poem was inspired by Nick or ( DarkVortex ). Thank you for the inspiration Nick. I appreciate it very much. You just brought this out of me with your latest post here in the Portal of Passion.
The winds whispers a sweet lullaby. As the ocean roars and the sea gulls fly. The sky fades dark with orange, purple, and pink. Sitting in peace as our anxiety sinks. Closer to paradise than earth can possible be. The mist from the ocean's kiss nips at our feet.
That colors fade as darkness covers the horizon. Ocean as far as the eye can see. In the darkness and void. Our care and pain is engulfed in the abyss. As we hold hands and gently kiss. Fireworks crackle and light up the sky as we sit and smile and freeze frame time. The moment seems to last forever. It tis a shame we can't live here forever.....
TJ
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DarkVortex
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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words." -Robert Frost
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Post by DarkVortex on Jul 21, 2005 3:06:56 GMT -5
Thank you, for the comments and the message on this. This poem is very good... it obviously shows a lot of feeling that you have or had for a loved one and I am greatly honored by what you said, thank you again and awsome job, like always......~Nick
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Post by T.J. Barber on Jul 22, 2005 0:04:26 GMT -5
Why thank you Nick. I appreciate your words. You should feel honored. Because you are indeed an honorable man.... Thanks again, TJ
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