DarkVortex
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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words." -Robert Frost
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Post by DarkVortex on Jul 19, 2005 16:57:29 GMT -5
Vast and outlandish the air whisper's to the water. Tis the morning dew so pristine like a god's daughter. Every beat of each wave flourishes with one motion. Sence's sail forth to the rhythm of the gracious ocean.
The cruel summer only show's the sign of a heavy glare. Creating game of heart with dare and a whimsical stare. For upon every second within every heart beat. There will be the love of it's arms to lift you from your feet.
Below the coral and deep within the shells. You will hear the sounds of each of heaven's bells. As you drift your feet along the smooth breathe of sand. You will go along side of your loved one, hand and hand.
During the bright day you'll enjoy life as you look out to afar. At night you will make you life wishes to every bright star. To just think there are many years ahead for eveything oh so new. But between you and the universe lies your love's deepest blue.
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Post by T.J. Barber on Jul 21, 2005 1:37:09 GMT -5
WOW!!!!!
Nick, I am so impressed. I can't say i've ever read anything with such depth since Frost's " The Road Less Traveled " I mean that too. This was great. I brought back so many memories for me as I read it. Many diverse memories and emotions flooded my mind. A grand memory of me fiance and I walking the beach at night. Sitting together holding hands and listening to the silent clatter of the sea gulls and the roar of the ocean as the mist rolls over us. WOW !!! That's an awesome memory. Great job Nick...
TJ
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