~Lingering Fidelity~

[DarkVortex]

Waking one morning I felt imbued by her scent.
My senses quivered as everything else was spent.
I turned to gaze unpon her exquisite face.
But nothing was there except a rose with velvet lace.

I lied there and imagined where she had blossomed to.
Searching the room for a single most substantial clue.
See, withought rain the flower has yet to mature.
As like our eloquent fidelity will evermore endure.

I ran downstairs as an angel would fly in the glossy sky.
To my satisfaction I revealed a notion with a solace sigh.
There rested a letter stating the reason she is away.
She has left like the sun leaving the shadows every day.

I know there is nothing wrong and she'll be back.
Since our immortal love and emotion has nothing to lack.
As in doing, the door flew open as I went insane.
She embraced me in her arms as she missed her train.

[NeverMore]

Please excuse me if I do not respond to all of these works and place my commentr on only one. I have just sat here reading the works you posted. I must say, I am impressed! I very very much enjoyed the reading and look forward to more of the same. The style and composure is just awe inspiring!

Keep up the great work!

[alostandbrokensoul]

WOW you are such a good poet, i love reading your work and you portray a happy ending well, not many can do that, it certainly is forced for me. great job!!

[DarkVortex]

Thank you so much for your comments... it truely means a lot... The people who read my work are my inspiration.. thanx... ~Nick