DarkVortex
Novice
Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words." -Robert Frost
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Post by DarkVortex on May 22, 2005 18:45:43 GMT -5
Faded out as the cold shivers my exhausted spine. My steps into depression go further as I delcine. I am worth nothing for I am but a puddle after a rain. Loosing the one I love all awhile striving to be sane.
I recieve not a hint of love from my heart's urge. Unleash the doubts once again so my hell shall emurge. I only longed to be longed without a shread of a tear. Since all a weep does is uplift the dread of a fear.
Contiue I shall to bestow my effort in any way I am able. To show my passion and sanctify our relaionship stable. Once said, I am no where to be found without her. Leaving her in a rested peace without the slightest stir.
I dream but a dream of a life with her glamourous sight. Awaken every morning and lie beside her every night. To that day come where we unify and graciously gleam. I shall sing of her name within a love of a dream.
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Post by Seth on Jul 11, 2005 0:39:24 GMT -5
This is all so beautifully delivered and has awesome flow and rhyme. I absolutely love the tone and feel, as well as the imagery it creates for the mind. Stunning words and stanzas... I really don't have a fav since it all left me with a lingering impact.
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