Road to Oasis

[adarnase]

In the desert I roam
The cold biting my flesh

I try to find my way
In the dunes of destiny

I stumble and fall
On the imaginary path of sand

Looking for you
Longing for us

A gaze at the carpet of stars in the heavens
My skin tingles

A glimpse at the white moon
My soul desires

A desert rose I pick
My body trembles

The desert sand I caress
My love ignites

I see you in the beauty of the skies
I dream of your golden skin when I touch the petals and the sands

[Cadre]

This is actually a really interesting poem. I like the idea behind it, the whole theme of being lost in a desert. The only thing I would suggest would be to try using more imagery to make your idea stronger. Great job.