I Love You, I Hate You

[amberputis]

I love you, I hate you
I adore yet despise you
You beat me, you hurt me
You flaunt and you tease me
You are like a piercing
through the center of my vein
It feels good at the nerve
but just leaves me in pain.
I feel drunk in desire,
before I get behind the wheel
Now I'm left with big problems
and deep wounds yet to heal
Now the flames are turned to ashes
and my rainbow has turned to grey
You amaze, yet appal me
in some mind-boggling way

[sweetest17sin]

this was really good. i loved the flow to it...its bouncy...sort of...? anyways, nice job!

[SilverEyes]

This reminds me of the relatiionship that I had once. Thankfully, I'm over that. Nice write, I like your descriptions.

[JosephScottMorris]

Amber,
I think this is a great poem, and enjoyed reading it,Thanks for sharing it! ;DJoe