adarnase
Novice
When I fall, I fall hard.
Posts: 14
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Post by adarnase on Jan 13, 2005 20:26:42 GMT -5
The vision of you A vivid spirit
Think of you and I start dreaming
The lust for you The wine in paradise
Touch of your hand The shower of love
Kiss of your tongue A well of life
A brush of your lips The cry of your freedom
The gaze of your eyes Serenity divine
A glimpse of your bosom Longing fulfilled
The fantasy of the meadows Passion waiting
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Post by Outcast on Jan 15, 2005 17:15:54 GMT -5
that pome is kool
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Post by John Barnett on Jan 20, 2005 3:02:12 GMT -5
Great job!
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adarnase
Novice
When I fall, I fall hard.
Posts: 14
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Post by adarnase on Jan 20, 2005 9:55:19 GMT -5
Thank you...
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Post by T.J. Barber on Jan 23, 2005 8:20:34 GMT -5
Interesting pic? Nice write, I really enjoyed reading this one. I have to agree with J, great job!
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