adarnase
Novice
When I fall, I fall hard.
Posts: 14
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Angel
Jan 9, 2005 4:37:16 GMT -5
Post by adarnase on Jan 9, 2005 4:37:16 GMT -5
You are the angel that appeared when I needed you the most
You are the angel that made me laugh when I was full of sorrow
You are the angel that gave me hope when i had given up
You are the angel that opened my eyes when I had been blind for so long
You are the angel that taught me the meaning of passion when I thought I knew it all.
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Angel
Jan 11, 2005 20:31:22 GMT -5
Post by X x K e l Z x X on Jan 11, 2005 20:31:22 GMT -5
This is sweet and romantic.
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Angel
Jan 15, 2005 15:51:56 GMT -5
Post by Solitary Poet on Jan 15, 2005 15:51:56 GMT -5
Interesting, I like the way the first line repeats itself.
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Angel
Jan 15, 2005 17:10:59 GMT -5
Post by Outcast on Jan 15, 2005 17:10:59 GMT -5
oh yes
i know how you fell
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Angel
Jan 15, 2005 17:12:44 GMT -5
Post by John Barnett on Jan 15, 2005 17:12:44 GMT -5
Sadly, I can identify with this poem, or at least I once could...days gone by.
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