Break Your Chains

adarnase
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When I fall, I fall hard.

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Break Your Chains Jan 9, 2005 4:35:29 GMT -5

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Post by adarnase on Jan 9, 2005 4:35:29 GMT -5

Break your chains
I will whisper
I love you

Open the door to your fortress
I will ride in
Like a knight in red armour

Follow me on this grassy path
I will lead you
To the a forest of hope

Fall with me through the clouds
I will catch you in the fall
And take you to heavenly joys

Lead me to your fountain
And I will drink from it
and be yours to command forever

Tell me to kneel
And I will embrace you in my arms
My hold will never waver

Stand by my side
And I will take hold of your waist
We will travel through eternity as one

Loyalty and devotion.

X x K e l Z x X Chapter Leader Just Me Posts: 1,035	Break Your Chains Jan 11, 2005 20:31:58 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by X x K e l Z x X on Jan 11, 2005 20:31:58 GMT -5 You have a unique format, I like this one also.
	~~KelZ~~ Z e p h y r Poet Club Administrative Assistant

adarnase Novice When I fall, I fall hard. Posts: 14	Break Your Chains Jan 15, 2005 14:45:57 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by adarnase on Jan 15, 2005 14:45:57 GMT -5 thank you for the feedback.
	Loyalty and devotion.

Outcast Administrator Executive Program Coordinator Posts: 30	Break Your Chains Jan 15, 2005 17:06:58 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Outcast on Jan 15, 2005 17:06:58 GMT -5 I really like your pome that is rellay how i write but anyways that was a good won so keep posting

Post by adarnase on Jan 9, 2005 4:35:29 GMT -5

Post by X x K e l Z x X on Jan 11, 2005 20:31:58 GMT -5

Post by adarnase on Jan 15, 2005 14:45:57 GMT -5

Post by Outcast on Jan 15, 2005 17:06:58 GMT -5