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Blessed
Dec 3, 2004 21:35:51 GMT -5
Post by T.J. Barber on Dec 3, 2004 21:35:51 GMT -5
I wrote this poem for someone very special to me. Someone I love more than anything in this world. The love of my life. The one who makes me feel so blessed.
Blessed
In times like this when I feel sad. I think of you and i'm made glad. You are my sunshine. My bright and shining star. I can feel your love even from afar. As if your there with me. Holding me with arms of gracefulness. And when you hold me close to heart. I know we'll never grow apart. And when I'm feeling low and stressed. I look at you and know i'm BLESSED..
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Wickedblades666
Apprentice
I Hate Life, but i am stuck in it by my own rules: death is for quitters, i dont quit...
Posts: 97
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Post by Wickedblades666 on Dec 5, 2004 2:24:40 GMT -5
Sry guy...I shouldnt post yet, because that is a chicks job...you know, the cliche "Awwwwww" and all...but i just had to post, that you must be with the love of your life, to write such passion filled poems about your apparent "muse"...the best of luck with her!
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Blessed
Dec 7, 2004 11:14:21 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Dec 7, 2004 11:14:21 GMT -5
i'll provide the cliche "aww" because that is a very sweet poem....especially the last line...that is the one that really made me thing "aww" very wonderful poem! great job TJ
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Blessed
Dec 13, 2004 13:39:03 GMT -5
Post by Seth on Dec 13, 2004 13:39:03 GMT -5
This is very beautiful and sweetly written. Love the emotion and flow- and the gentle loving mesage here. Beautiful write.
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