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Post by A2sHaTo on Nov 30, 2004 20:37:06 GMT -5
Here we go.. (I'm watching you.) I can't ignore this.. (I'm standing right behind you.)
My hands impatiently placed.. (Positioned exactly on you.) Subtle lips on my neck.. (Laced with great passion.)
Here we go.. (I'm watching you.) I can't make a sound yet.. (I'm standing right behind you.)
My feet rest lightly on the floor.. (Anxiously awaiting your arrival.) Oh senses of mine full of the moment.. (They're easing towards overdrive.)
Here we go.. (I'm watching you.) I can't take it much longer.. (I'm standing right behind you.)
Lie me on the bed now.. (Bodies of overdue pleasure.) Slowly whisper your conducing plans.. (I hear them in my ear through your breathing.)
Here we go.. (I'm watching you.) My breaths are shorter.. (I've forgotten how to breathe.)
Show me what you refuse.. (Everyone has a limit.) Take me away from here.. (Take me into ectasy.)
Here we go.. (I'm watching you.) Tonight is our night.. (The night we share together.)
07/13/2004
"Don't leave me now, please stay with me. They'll leave us alone, they'll let us be. You're my only natural escape, the only drug I take. You're my only natural high, the one I won't foresake."
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Dec 2, 2004 6:59:59 GMT -5
I really liked these, good work, welcome to Poet Club.
Fox
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
Posts: 411
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Post by Seth on Dec 3, 2004 9:58:09 GMT -5
Awesome write; the emotion, the passion... Beautiful in all sense of the word!
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Wickedblades666
Apprentice
I Hate Life, but i am stuck in it by my own rules: death is for quitters, i dont quit...
Posts: 97
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Post by Wickedblades666 on Dec 5, 2004 2:10:11 GMT -5
interesting peice, i liked it, but very interesting...alotta emotions in that, great write
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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on Dec 11, 2004 7:46:35 GMT -5
hmm... has a good rhythm to it... i like it... would make a good song...
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