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Post by Alyssa on Nov 30, 2004 0:26:22 GMT -5
Amongst the qualms of our souls
You take my hand
And pull me atop
Out of the darkness
In an attempt to quiet the thoughts
That plague our minds
We abandon all
And dance
In a sweetness only known
By few
There are only three
Who dwell here
Three unified heartbeats
Woven together as one
Two lovers and their creator
We dance
In perfect harmony
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Post by T.J. Barber on Nov 30, 2004 15:25:54 GMT -5
Very nice! I enjoyed this pieve very much and I must say, it really touched me deeply. Great write,
TJ
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Seth
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Post by Seth on Dec 3, 2004 9:56:22 GMT -5
Hm, the simplcity here is beautiful and heart-warming. Love the feel and how easily this reads... Wonderful write.
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