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Post by Broken hope on Nov 29, 2004 20:20:46 GMT -5
I'll come over at midnight and slip into your room Just to fall in love all over again I won't be able to speak and please dont assume That im hear to break your heart or be an angel sent
A million romantic things to say Not one meaning a damn said to anyone but you I want to end all these games we play i just want to believe it when you say i love you
I'm at your window but the knock can't be heard So beautiful just to watch you sleep I'm starting to believe all these things are absurd Maybe she was right and im in too deep
Everythings a tragedy and nothing is right But i lover her and refuse to give up without a fight Everyone is a wretch and im out of sight Just below your window as you turn on the light
You look so beautiful tonight So happy that i just cant bear to say You look so blissful tonight i guess i'll just walk away
I guess i'll say goodbye through the glass Everythings a tragedy but this is right My time by your side has finally passed Just below your window as you turn off the light
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Post by John Barnett on Nov 29, 2004 20:24:20 GMT -5
This is very romantic and nicely written, keep it up bh
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Seth
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Post by Seth on Dec 3, 2004 10:01:18 GMT -5
Wow, tragically beautiful piece. Lovely flow and just real deep emotion pours out of every word. Stellar write, it's brimming with sadness and love...
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Wickedblades666
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Post by Wickedblades666 on Dec 5, 2004 2:17:13 GMT -5
i love the part about how she wakes up and the character walks away, just lovely, how love and tragedy go together so well
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