Mikhael
Novice
...and love is not a victory march/it's a cold and it's a broken hallelujah...
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Post by Mikhael on Nov 28, 2004 18:02:54 GMT -5
Forever is Now Mik Namlieh
Through the years I have run like a cloud in the sky, Like a wind in the mind, like a smile on the sly, Like a child through a field of the prairies at home, From a star-stricken love that I bore all alone.
And the nights I spent dreaming were but nights in my mind In the daylight, the sun-day, the hours behind All the banter, pretending, and playing at reason Unsuspecting the change with the turn of the season.
And your eyes and your smile and your voice that did render Me prone to a lyrical, rumbling surrender, To trust undesired, uncalled for, unknown Shaking deeply, afraid that you’ll leave me alone.
Hold me tight as my lover, my disint’rested friend, Pure and platonic with a passion unending, And I’ll kiss you, your eyelids, your fingers, your brow, Cause you’re my love forever, forever is now.
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Post by nevadasky on Nov 28, 2004 18:36:36 GMT -5
oh mik,
your words were like a drink in the desert, so fulfilling and soulful, with the gift of renewal...great imagery. great write. Bravo!
"now" is really all any of us have.
nevadasky
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Mwalvbk
Apprentice
I came from the fire, now I'm here to burn
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Post by Mwalvbk on Dec 3, 2004 12:58:20 GMT -5
This is very profound and romantic, nice work Mik.
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Wickedblades666
Apprentice
I Hate Life, but i am stuck in it by my own rules: death is for quitters, i dont quit...
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Post by Wickedblades666 on Dec 5, 2004 2:21:30 GMT -5
*wordless*
Just know that you wrote a great write
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
Posts: 411
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Post by Seth on Dec 13, 2004 13:30:09 GMT -5
Like a child through a field of the prairies at home, From a star-stricken love that I bore all alone. And the nights I spent dreaming were but nights in my mind In the daylight, the sun-day, the hours behind And your eyes and your smile and your voice that did render Me prone to a lyrical, rumbling surrender, Beautifully written, I totally agree with nevadasky... Very soft, whimsical and mesmorizing- this is as I said, beautiful.
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