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Post by Broken hope on Nov 26, 2004 21:15:53 GMT -5
I started life today I started without any word to say A silent place of fear and nothingness A world built up around lonliness
I came to find many living in this world Some born of boys and others of girls Each one deprived of the heart they once had Each yearning for love to not be a fad
I found my lover here today They found themself asking me to stay There are too many lines i have wasted on you When running away seemed to do
So now my love my pain my hate I wish you not to have my same fate So leave this place and run from me For you and me this is only destiny
We said our goodbyes Promised eachother not to cry It was killing me inside Anything for you, my divine
I found my life today It ended with every word you could say An end of a romantic tragedy with-in my mind It was all for you my love my pain my divine
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Nov 29, 2004 15:32:14 GMT -5
This is very, very, very good, I really enjoyed this a lot. Every single word was amazing and intricate to the poem altogether.
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Mwalvbk
Apprentice
I came from the fire, now I'm here to burn
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Post by Mwalvbk on Dec 3, 2004 12:59:11 GMT -5
This is great work, I really enjoyed every word of this piece to be honest. Very well done.
Matt
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Post by cherryXchapstick on Dec 4, 2004 12:33:07 GMT -5
i really like this.
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