le tigre the tiger

[pig]

le tigre the tiger;
the sass in her silence,
the sex in her violence,
has hypnotised me.

this feeling im finding im
failing to hide and
i cant quite decide if i
want her to see

le tigre i see ya
the tiger inside ya
the flies and the liars
surrounding this scene.

im considering mabye (but)
im drunk and im lazy,
im foolish, but baby
i just gotta believe...

[NeverMore]

when I first started to read this, I was saying huh? but as I got into it it flowed like magic. The way you placed the words I would have tought would not work, but it did and did so very very amazingly! Just an awsome work here..

[pig]

thank you so much. it was just me sat in a bar thinking about someone who is totally amazing, but i can never really find the courage to tell her so, and so, i drink and sit and think about it. its kinda, i dunno, lustful, but at the same time a genuine love.

thanks again!

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

oh i really liked this piece - it's so sensual.

it feels like you've caught the drunken clarity that only lasts a second...scrap me liking it - i love it!