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[alostandbrokensoul]

Wasnt sure what to title it thought maybe but eh. I didnt like it though I'm not very good with the love thing I like it sorta it was supposed to be a song but didnt work out hope you like it.

Maybe I'm afraid of loving you
maybe I'm afraid to care
maybe I'm afraid of hurting you
maybe is just not fair.

maybe I don't wanna see you hurt
maybe I don't wanna see you cry
maybe just isnt good enough
maybe is just a lie.

maybe I wanna answer you
maybe I really wanna try
maybe I wanna say I do
maybe I really wanna cry.

maybe I love you
maybe I wanna marry you
maybe I hurt you
maybe I wanna care for you.

Maybe is just maybe
so heres my answer to you
yes I will marry you
and yes I do love you.

[bloodredtears]

i love this piece...you write love poetry very well...i loved the second stanza the most! great job!

[T.J. Barber]

Very well written my friend. I also loved the second stanza. A few months ago I couldn't visit this forum due to some very troubling personal problems between myself and my ex but.....thanks be to God I have actually patched things up with her and we are now returning to our relationship as if nothing happened. That just shows you that love conquers all things....

[Seth]

Beautiful piece, the flow is great and the 'maybe' at the beginning of each line really didn't bother me.
Wonderfully written, the first and second stanzas are my favorites.