Your love

[alostandbrokensoul]

So this is one of my first love ones(not very good at them) the ending isnt the best but let me know what you think.

you hold my hand and walk with me
you pull me close into a soft embrace
your love is all I can see
your tender touch, your loving face.

you trace your fingers through my hair,
you lightly kiss my brow
you show me that you care
you make me happy somehow.

you wipe the tears on my face
you always make me smile
you always keep me safe
you always have a different style.

you hold my hand and walk with me
keep me warm at night
your love sets me free
you make it all seem right.

You love me,
and I love you
you make me happy
and I make you happy too.

[Seth]

Simple, gentle and sweet. Lovely written.

[bloodredtears]

this is a great piece! the first stanza is amazing....the rest of the poem is very good also! and i did like the ending, even if it wasn't quite as eloquent as the opening...it still fit in with the basic meaning of the piece...a love you share with someone...great job!