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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on Jul 13, 2004 9:50:38 GMT -5
Wilted black rose petals cascade down your face as the moon lit up in blue flames scorching the path you're walking on engraved on it now forever are our names
The ground has turned to sand as waves try and pull you down to the sea your feet refuse their seductive embrace determined to pave your way to me
Its raining now, raining crimson blood as the sand turns to a battle field you're lost, blinded by the war in front of your eyes but to the screams and deaths you do not yield
The rain has stopped, the sun is shining as the battlefield evanesce out of sight you then shot the sun with an arrow you watch it as it falls into the ocean, day now replaced by night
The moon's weeping silver tears as the tears form a pathway leading you to me you follow it, curious where it leads the end is near yet there's still nothing to see
A mirror then appears at the end as you gaze at your own reflection your eyes grow large for you see me standing beside you and you wonder if all of it is just an illusion
You turn to me and embrace me tight as I melt in your arms completely you smile still hugging me so close you and I both now happy you've found me
note: my own fairytale... haha....
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Seth
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Post by Seth on Jul 17, 2004 16:49:03 GMT -5
Hm, beautiful... The first stanza was my favorite... Love the wording and the images this piece created.
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Post by Mikepoet on Jul 23, 2004 0:12:11 GMT -5
You are talented, please keep posting. ;D
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