NeverMore
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Post by NeverMore on Jul 12, 2004 19:03:27 GMT -5
so many years of being so cold never knowing just what tears would mean
so many people passed my way no tears were shed at the parting
a small taste of salt sampled yet no rivers formed then there was you
along you came with words that made me smile so much the tears just flowed
words sometimes came in sadness and anger making them a torrent
the day you left the rivers flowed for weeks
I thought I would get beyond that feeling of loss in my life
yet each day with each thought of the love we share more of the same find me here
I hide behind a closed door so no one can see
thinking that if no one sees they just never happened
now with words from you they flow steady unabated
these tears want to tell someone who would listen
this love was given with no condition this love is given without regret
I do not wish the tears to cease with time you have always been worth each and every one
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Seth
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Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Post by Seth on Jul 17, 2004 16:53:43 GMT -5
The title suits this piece well. Wonderful wording and emotion bled tearfully throughout this. Wonderful write, truly captivating.
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Post by Mikepoet on Jul 23, 2004 0:14:10 GMT -5
What Seth said..Well done.
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NeverMore
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Beethoven Looking f*g
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Post by NeverMore on Aug 12, 2004 14:50:49 GMT -5
Ah yes.. the woman who taught me that tears were for more then just the weak... it took many years to learn how to do that...
I thank you for your comments, coming from guys.. it says a lot about the fact that we guys are not as ...male *LOL* as the ladies might think.
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