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Love Me
Jul 10, 2004 20:43:48 GMT -5
Post by bloodybarbie on Jul 10, 2004 20:43:48 GMT -5
I sit here, nothing but silence, fills the air. I think how it would be, if YOU were here with me. but what I know is, she LoVeS YOU. but what I need to know is, do YOU LoVe her? now it is time, for me to curl up and die, she is my friend, but this means the end. I miss YOU. YOU left me, sitting here, with nothing but silence, filling the cold air. I hear YOU sweet, soft voice, in the back of my clouded mind, saying to me, YOU LoVe me. But I know YOU, I just can’t get over the LoVe, that resides in my heart. so I’ll just sit here, with nothing but silence, filling the frosted air, waiting for the time, YOU come back to me, and whisper in my ear, it is time, come home to me, I LoVe YOU, but do YOU LoVe me?
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Love Me
Jul 11, 2004 17:10:45 GMT -5
Post by alostandbrokensoul on Jul 11, 2004 17:10:45 GMT -5
beautiful. I liked it. but your poem expressed the real question of love "do you love them and do they love you" brilliant keep it up.
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Love Me
Jul 23, 2004 0:05:10 GMT -5
Post by Mikepoet on Jul 23, 2004 0:05:10 GMT -5
Ditto to lostandbrokensoul.
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Love Me
Sept 25, 2004 21:27:50 GMT -5
Post by X x K e l Z x X on Sept 25, 2004 21:27:50 GMT -5
That is touching and very deep!
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Love Me
Sept 26, 2004 5:28:22 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Sept 26, 2004 5:28:22 GMT -5
oh this is beautiful. very well done.
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