NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
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Hands
Jun 12, 2004 0:14:47 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on Jun 12, 2004 0:14:47 GMT -5
standing beside the moon
with a smile in my fingers
walking hand in hand
as rain sprinkles down
down a quiet lane
or a busy street
our hands intertwined
molded into one
where ever we are
feels so right and true
your love completing me
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Hands
Jun 20, 2004 16:32:11 GMT -5
Post by Mikepoet on Jun 20, 2004 16:32:11 GMT -5
Life is kind of empty without love..
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pig
Novice
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Hands
Jun 26, 2004 15:27:25 GMT -5
Post by pig on Jun 26, 2004 15:27:25 GMT -5
yeah...anyway...what made you write this poem. experience or ideal?
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NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
Posts: 454
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Hands
Jun 26, 2004 16:24:17 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on Jun 26, 2004 16:24:17 GMT -5
experience and longing *s*
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Hands
Jun 26, 2004 20:36:02 GMT -5
Post by Seth on Jun 26, 2004 20:36:02 GMT -5
Love is debatable... But this was a nice gentle write, calming and sweet. Very much enjoyed reading it.
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