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Post by amelie on Feb 21, 2004 18:54:58 GMT -5
I have burned with it; Daubed in sulphur On a pyre piled high,
That crackles and singes In flare of flaming hair, Fretting the night
With golden motes, As they sizzle in sparkling Halo around my boiling flesh;
As breath scours and tears In the howling wind-rush, And scorches the shrieks,
Sucking all voice into silence, Before that eyes bubble in A shimmer of sheeted flame,
Tasting my body, Like the lick and sear Of a furious lover;
Peeled to the flesh And the gash of my sex; Staked and spread apart
As a heretic on a cross, On a bed of ash and cinders; Like last night’s rape,
Abandoned to smoulder In a morning wasteland; The embers of passion,
Pored over for a trinket; Some smouldering tissue, That once was tender,
Now a charred, bitter, Black debris; just Conflagrated blown dust.
Love? Yes, I know love; I hover over its remains; A ghost dancing in the smoke.
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 21, 2004 20:50:10 GMT -5
this piece is very dark...and very descriptive...i love it...especially the last stanza..great job melis!
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 21, 2004 23:00:53 GMT -5
Wow, these descriptions are intense and very powerful. I love the last stanza. Wonderful write.
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