NeverMore
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Post by NeverMore on May 28, 2004 23:20:31 GMT -5
Do you remember? when first we made our vow. A love to last forever. not just the here and now.
A love that started, in friendships tender hands. Something we found together, to travel times shifting sands.
We started out so carelessly, no thoughts on what we planned. Not knowing down the road a ways, we would step in shifting sands.
Now the hourglass is broken, our dreams of tomorrow dashed. We did not care how fast we moved, and the hour glass, it smashed.
But in the sands of that glass, there is a grain of love. Where now there is just emptiness, There will someday grow love.
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Post by angel on Jun 2, 2004 22:58:09 GMT -5
this flowed extremely well....I didnt even notice there was rhyming...therefore, it didnt bug me...therefore VERY nice job on the rhyming! This puts divorce into beautiful words...a whole new perspective...nice
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NeverMore
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Beethoven Looking f*g
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Post by NeverMore on Jun 4, 2004 2:02:59 GMT -5
rhyming??? where? quick get my eraser!! *LOL*.. not something I use often at all .. *S*
thank you muchly
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