No More

[NeverMore]

No more sad times, mad, or bad times,
No more minor keys
Life's for living, sharing, giving,
Life's for you and me.
When the going's rough and you've had enough,
Leave your troubles and your woes.
Turn the other cheek and forget your grief,
Make a friend out of your foe.

Give me a happy ending every time.
We'll kiss and make up,
That's a very peaceful sign.
Give me a happy ending every time.
Don't be unhappy, everything will work out fine.

No more fighting, scratching, biting,
No more police and thieves.
All is sweetness, light, and neatness,
Yes sir, no thanks, please.
When you had your fill of life's ugly pills
The sadness and the pain.
Take the box of pills and attendant ills,
Flush them down the drain.

Give me a happy ending every time.
We'll kiss and make up,
That's a very peaceful sign.
Give me a happy ending every time.
Don't be unhappy, everything will work out fine

[bloodredtears]

wonderful piece here...the rhyming is great..and the verses hold a lot of meaning in them...one thing..in the "chorus" like part, the part you repeat...the repetition of the line "give me a happy ending every time" seems to detract from the general flow of that stanza...but that's just what i think...other than that i loved it! great job!

[NeverMore]

I do agree with you on the flow... to me.. not one of my best...