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May 18, 2004 19:21:39 GMT -5
Post by shebangs17 on May 18, 2004 19:21:39 GMT -5
So many things I wish I told you, I've had my opportunities. I see you almost everyday. It pains me to be so close to you. Yet, when I'm away, I want to cry all the pain out of myself. There is something you're hiding, I can see it. But is it me? Am I nothing more than an irritation? I wish I could be sure. My crimson lips are willing to spill my secrets. But are you willing to hear them? I love you. I have said it in my head over and over. I will always love you, even if you turn me down. I want you to know that, but I think it'll make it worse. Why have you changed so much? Your anger is palpable, and it hurts me more than you'll ever know. One day, my heart won't be able to take it anymore. I will reveal to you all that's on my mind and in my heart. You are a part of my soul now, and without you, I would be so sad. I can never thank you enough for that. My burning green eyes will lay themselves upon you again, your face burned in my mind. I don't want to end it.
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May 18, 2004 19:50:50 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on May 18, 2004 19:50:50 GMT -5
wonderful piece...seems almost more like heartbreak than romance because you're in so much pain trying to decide whether to tell him your true feelings...but depite that it's a wonderful piece...all the feelings are things i can relate to...wonderful written...
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May 28, 2004 18:15:59 GMT -5
Post by Mikepoet on May 28, 2004 18:15:59 GMT -5
I wish someone felt that way about me and it was quite sweet to read. You expressed you feelings well.
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