Sensibility

[bloodredtears]

Sensibility
May 17, 2004
11:05 pm

**not one of my best, but meh..first love poem i've written in forever it seems

a word of thanks
a touch of understanding
a look of compassion
a sigh of contentment

an explanation
followed by conversation;
communication

a hug
or a kiss, a caress;
sensation

flirting eyes
and a deep sparkle;
observation

breath exhaled
as a gentle wind;
relaxation

Maybe the new senses
are speaking, touching
looking and sighing
Because when I'm near you
I want to use them all

[NeverMore]

you know, you may not see the quality in the words you wrote here, but I see it. The transfer of feelings in just the way the words felt awsome. You have a great deal of talent expressing what you feel.

[angel]

I really like it. The poem has intense feeling to it...very nice

[Mikepoet]

Straight from the heart. If whoever you wrote this to likes poetry..they will like this..