NeverMore
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May 7, 2004 3:12:00 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on May 7, 2004 3:12:00 GMT -5
So many words
sitting in my mind
things I want to say
a life I want to live
the touch of a hand
the love you hold inside
waiting as I can
to tell you my heart
yet you know it so well
all that is within
more within today
then has been seen
there is a fear
I see within
yet fears shall pass
touch will teach
we shall know a peace
love lives here
(yes, the spelling mistake is intentional for a change *S*)
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Wurds
May 14, 2004 15:52:23 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on May 14, 2004 15:52:23 GMT -5
i love this piece...and i love that you intentionally misspelled the title....made me want to read it cuz i wanted to see what might be different about this piece....it was great! good job!
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NeverMore
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May 14, 2004 15:56:22 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on May 14, 2004 15:56:22 GMT -5
BRT... I do thank you greatly for your comments, it is nice to know someone enjoys these ramblings of mine *L*.. many more to come I am sure, some old, some new, some odd and some blue...(oh man.. talk about a bad play on words!) Thank you again  |
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