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Post by PoeticWarfare on May 5, 2004 23:48:53 GMT -5
Finding reason to roll up my sleeves, and work harder every day Longing to find much more peace, a passion I hope is meant to stay I see the way she looks at me, with a tiny smile streched across her lips To enjoy the simple splendor, the fire that is entrapped in every kiss My fingers fumbleing within golden locks, hopeing to find a perfect key That will open the doors to happiness, and love to be shared eternally
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Post by John Barnett on May 6, 2004 18:46:16 GMT -5
Short and to the point, very good, very well written.
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amberputis
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~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on May 7, 2004 21:51:16 GMT -5
yes this was very good, each line was written wonderfully
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