NeverMore
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Post by NeverMore on May 5, 2004 23:29:31 GMT -5
This poem is one of very few in my life with a dedication. Simply dedicated to Melissa, now and always. No matter how far away she is *S*
My dearest my unholy girl Forever I've known you Seems so long you've tainted my sin I just hope you know This secret burning in my soul Never found a way to let go Just don't question me Just taint my sin again I don't know if I've ever been alive Before this time when I first touched you Lie to me at my expense because I love it You're my sacrafice, my lamb I take every week I think I'm crazy to love you Since love is only what I pay you for I've found some temporary sanity in Your warm firm skin on my hands Why now do I feel myself start slipping away You look so precious, you are so precious I've come, round a full circle now You look so precious, you look so precious, you are so precious...always
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Post by PoeticWarfare on May 5, 2004 23:54:12 GMT -5
hmmmm.....I don't know if its just the mood I'm in, but I'm somehow reminded of a Tool song by this piece....*shrugs*
anyhow, great piece Nevermore, I'm sure she'll love it
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Post by bloodredtears on May 14, 2004 15:41:59 GMT -5
i liked this piece alot...the title is awesome...i don't know why but the image of a gothic angel just intrigues me...reminds me of my desktop actually....great stuff!
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Post by NeverMore on May 15, 2004 0:49:50 GMT -5
I will do here, what I never ever do.. *S* This was written for Eblizabeth Bathory from the NeverMore Boards. If there could ever be such a person as a gothic angel, she would be this. If we could be in one place at the same time on this planet, the world would have to really watch out *L* I will even admit that she is likely the first unconditional love I ever felt .. still do.. despite the disance... one of two women who got that close in all these years... and the only painfully honest human I ever met... (I know you will read that my life.. but ... you are worth the good words.. goth or not *S*)
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