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Post by Mikepoet on May 1, 2004 23:08:07 GMT -5
Teardrops fall one by one each tells a story of pain. You do not know what to do your lover has left you again.
You need someone you can count on to be there when you call. A man who will open his heart to you who will catch you when you fall.
You need a true love there when you need him. True love, never wants to be free. Go if you will, console when you’re hurt all you need is a true love.
You sit at home all alone tearstained satin by the phone. Dreaming of the day someone will truly care.
There is a love for every girl but it it’s as rare as a perfect pearl and when it’s found it should be cherished for all eternity.
What you need is a true love.
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 2, 2004 19:21:02 GMT -5
mike, this was really beautiful. you're such a raw writer, i love your work and i *try* to feel your pain. x rinna x
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Post by Mikepoet on May 3, 2004 13:59:45 GMT -5
Thank you freindgirl..This is one of my favorites I have written..Again I wrote it at 19.
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Post by bloodredtears on May 4, 2004 10:18:27 GMT -5
good piece here...true love is what everyone is looking for, and like you said it is as rare as a pearl....very hard to find...great job!
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Post by Mikepoet on May 4, 2004 10:55:42 GMT -5
Again I thank you. ;D
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amberputis
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Post by amberputis on May 4, 2004 19:24:05 GMT -5
excellent!!! i loved this as well, it's reassuring for us younger ones to know that there are guys, even at 19, that can feel this way. thanks for sharing mike
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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on May 5, 2004 7:43:54 GMT -5
hmm... I really enjoy your poetry, Mike. I really love this one... another one to add to my favorites... Excellent work.
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Post by Mikepoet on May 5, 2004 8:33:20 GMT -5
Amber I started writing at like 10 or 11 and at 19 had a good idea of what was needed for a Lady to feel complete. Alex'z I am glad you enjoy my work. I need to get published more. I am trying to get published on a ezine now. It feels good to me for someone to say :This is my fav. of yous." because that means they have read enough of mu stuff to have a fav!! Thank you so much both of you LAdies.
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