A Thousand Roses

[PoeticWarfare]

Around the fence, a thousand roses in bloom
Just hope the thorns, don't come out of hiding too soon
Can't have her reaching out, just to prick her fingers
Even though the wounds heal, the pain always lingers

The bulbs have barely opened, just crawled out of nature's womb
Tiny little seeds she planted, surving the harshness of winter's tomb
Nurtured by the gentle touch, the silk that becomes her skin
Past the field of a thousand roses, a home for her to find within

Amongst the subtleness of dreams, I hope she'll find the way
Become more than just a vision, a reality to forever stay
A message inside a dream, almost too beautiful to be real
Providing me with just one more, heart that I must steal

[Mikepoet]

Good poem. Sounds like a perfect female to be around.

[amberputis]

i like this, your use of words were fabulous...what a way to truly express a want, wonderful piece

[PoeticWarfare]

thanks for the kind words!

[John Barnett]

I like the rhyme scheme and the whole piece in general, very good Jason.