imaginary goddess #5
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shape me into something I never will be, and you'll find out this facade was an escape from reality.
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Post by imaginary goddess #5 on Feb 17, 2004 17:40:35 GMT -5
The hours of darkness are radiant and sultry Happiness erodes on sleeping spirits – Reminders of the past haunting them Their dreams and thoughts All is well – but lingering still are apparitions of love
And there, She lies in whimsical silence, upon the radiant moon Her dispirited eyes – slumberous and full of woe Tenderly, wandering in and out of sleep and reality Her sorrow luminous in the eve’s weaving shadow
And there, You may have heard a harmony of horror Singing on the wings of the wind, is its lullaby of agony and ache; Diminutive, taunting whispers of that night so long ago, When hopelessly she fell in love – a love that could only have been fake
And there, The ocean, resplendent and bright, becomes her mourning tear The rattling tempest is her whirlwind of emotions and despise A leaf falling to the ground is her crestfallen soul, and The spider’s delicate web becomes all her truth and lies
And there, You see her love is gone – dead and trapped in Hades His soul wanders, and a woman, spiteful and vindictive, Snatches his hapless heart, clutching it in her ruthless grasp Taking away the only reason a lonely deity had left to live
(this poem is about the myth of Aphrodite/Adonis/Persephone)
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 17, 2004 18:08:56 GMT -5
Wonderful write. The descriptions for great and I love the allusion to ancient mythology.
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 17, 2004 21:44:52 GMT -5
mythology is great, but i'm not very well versed in it...i thoroughly enjoyed this piece..good job!
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Eclipse
Apprentice
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Post by Eclipse on Feb 18, 2004 16:53:58 GMT -5
interesting. i like the way you describe her.
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