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broken
Apr 28, 2004 18:16:46 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Apr 28, 2004 18:16:46 GMT -5
To live and to love I was broken once Never knowing what was next Leaving my life To cradle another Finding myself
I thought Maybe I could be someone I was shadow Always lingering Never the light
When I was feeling black Red, blue and brown You saw the white I was reborn I was new
Meaning never meant Anything You were meaning You were everything
I love to live Love to love I am new Unbroken
I am in love.
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broken
May 1, 2004 17:23:38 GMT -5
Post by PoeticWarfare on May 1, 2004 17:23:38 GMT -5
its magical yes! ;D
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broken
May 2, 2004 3:54:52 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 2, 2004 3:54:52 GMT -5
PW, isn't it just? ;D x rinna x
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broken
May 4, 2004 10:17:05 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on May 4, 2004 10:17:05 GMT -5
love...ah that tricky emotion...feels so good while your in it..hurts so much when you lose it....this is a wonderful poem...i hope it the love thing is going well for you! great piece...
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broken
May 4, 2004 18:42:14 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 4, 2004 18:42:14 GMT -5
yes, love changes everything, even the more stubborn mules like myself. x rinna x
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
Posts: 330
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broken
May 4, 2004 19:21:07 GMT -5
Post by amberputis on May 4, 2004 19:21:07 GMT -5
great expression-awesome job
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broken
May 4, 2004 20:50:18 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 4, 2004 20:50:18 GMT -5
amber, thank you x rinna x
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