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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Apr 28, 2004 18:01:31 GMT -5
I think I'm fat
You laugh and tell me
I'm a supermodel
Then I want to punch you
We have a dishwasher
You leave butter in the sink
You make me crazy
I love what you do
What you do to me
When I wake up
Morningbreath
So sweet and repulsive
You are so pretty
I go mental when you don't listen
I know you do it on purpose
Kneejerk reaction
Get out of my house
I love you
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Post by PoeticWarfare on May 1, 2004 17:19:58 GMT -5
*laughs* my wife would probably say such things about me, if I had one that is  |
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Post by Mikepoet on May 1, 2004 22:55:32 GMT -5
This is a good love for you rinna. Now do not let go!!
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 2, 2004 1:08:38 GMT -5
PW,
i don't think i've met a man who HASN'T been like this...haha!
mike,
don't worry, as much as mat sh*ts me, i sh*t him ten times more, it's a great relationship...haha! if he had to write an ode to me, it'd be an epic tragedy.
x rinna x
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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on May 2, 2004 4:44:14 GMT -5
I think I'm fat
You laugh and tell me
I'm a supermodel
lol!!! I love that.
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 2, 2004 5:18:23 GMT -5
Then I want to punch you
ah, alex, THAT is the bit that MAKES the poem. ;D love, for me, is volatile, crazy, manic, and that's just in my head! glad you enjoyed!
x rinna x
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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on May 2, 2004 9:09:50 GMT -5
 this is what I feel towards alex too... I go from wanting to strangle him to smiling at his sweet words... |
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Post by John Barnett on May 2, 2004 16:55:29 GMT -5
This was nice, very down to Earth, very good.
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 2, 2004 17:03:20 GMT -5
MOMF, thanks for reading!  x rinna x |
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Post by amberputis on May 4, 2004 19:26:52 GMT -5
this poem is so entertaining, yet just like many couples today, i loved this. great job!
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 4, 2004 20:48:08 GMT -5
amber,
i'm glad you enjoyed. i live this every day...haha, it's FUN!
x rinna x
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this is what I feel towards alex too... I go from wanting to strangle him to smiling at his sweet words... 
