NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
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Post by NeverMore on Apr 27, 2004 4:01:49 GMT -5
once in a lifetime something feels so right once in a lifetime it says it just might
a dream while your waking plays out on the stage eyes so wide open while your turning the page
one in the billions comes to you face to face taking your hand keeping your pace
the moon never brighter the grass was never so green a love never truer have you ever seen
once in a lifetime someone comes along bring the future sounding like a song
(each love feels like this and it is that once. You will never love twice the same, cherish each love in your life like the treasure it truely is. Love, short or long is the greatest gift we can ever bestow on each other)
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Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 27, 2004 16:31:57 GMT -5
Nice imagery Joe. I liked the simplicity of this piece.
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Post by PoeticWarfare on Apr 28, 2004 23:11:16 GMT -5
how very artistic, and very true all at the same time....excellent piece
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Post by Mikepoet on Apr 30, 2004 12:31:52 GMT -5
Ditto to PoeticWarfare.
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