Hunter
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Post by Hunter on Apr 25, 2004 23:53:13 GMT -5
Constellation
When was it that you
stopped being a contellation
in the southern night sky
and became the sun
that my world
revolves around?
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NeverMore
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Post by NeverMore on Apr 26, 2004 0:26:28 GMT -5
I remember feeling like this once..many eons ago.. so few words with such intense meaning!! Fabulous!!
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Hunter
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Post by Hunter on Apr 26, 2004 0:29:40 GMT -5
Thank you  I don't know whether or not he feels the same way. Sometimes I think he does, othertimes I know he doesn't. |
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Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 27, 2004 0:11:04 GMT -5
I also have felt like this on many occassions. However, my most recent experience with this emotion has proved to be worth my troubles. Great job...however, I did notice that maybe this one should have been placed in the Short Poetic Pieces board. But, it fits just as well here...
Great job, TJ
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Post by Hunter on Apr 27, 2004 0:30:24 GMT -5
TJ, thank you. I posed this one in here because, well, it's actually one of my longer poems. My short ones are *really* short |
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Post by NeverMore on Apr 27, 2004 3:42:24 GMT -5
chuckles at the thought I just had of arguing with the founder *LOL* It is short, very true, it is a gem true... but it is about as romantic as they come.. (yeah yeah... I am an old trouble maker *SNIX*)
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Post by Hunter on Apr 27, 2004 5:51:24 GMT -5
LMAO
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Post by Mikepoet on Apr 29, 2004 10:52:11 GMT -5
The sun is the center of the universe, I have felt that way about someone before.
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Post by Hunter on Apr 29, 2004 14:20:46 GMT -5
Mike,
I always seem to fly straight into it, crash and burn.
Thank you.
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