NeverMore
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Post by NeverMore on Apr 25, 2004 11:53:01 GMT -5
A princess in my life you never try to be perfect in life you have never claimed
what you are you say is the one for only me dedicated before request loving me regardless
you care to do things others walk away from from so very far away you comfort me so
you've offered to me my life back again to help me walk again when I stumble and fall
my love, my life I will bring you home soon to do what you desire and keep me steady
I will give you all my love as long as we live and well beyond I will hold you as mine
your giving to me all your most beautiful years out of love because of my needs
I give to you the sanity that remains the dreams you have asked though they seem so small
I wish to give to you the family you desire The home that you ask for beside me the rest of my days
I do not try to understand how you could love me but by Devine intervention I would remain alone
I have asked for your hand to pledge my life to yours to tie us in our faith until eternity ceases to be
I give to you all I ever shall be for without your love it never will be
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 26, 2004 15:28:16 GMT -5
Interesting write, very good, I really enjoyed this. Keep it up NM.
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Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 27, 2004 0:06:49 GMT -5
Very good Joe...I enjoyed the rythym. I enjoyed it very much....Keep up the good work....
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NeverMore
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Post by NeverMore on Apr 27, 2004 3:48:04 GMT -5
I had to smile at the comments on this poem. It is one of my sentimental favorites. The woman spoken of in this poem, I met when she was 13 or 14 and I was married. We were good friends for a while, then lost touch. 7 years later, we met again, needless to say, life changed a great deal, you would never guess by who and what we are, that she is simply the very best friend I have alive. You will meet her in the future here, as she plans to join when she returns to the net. I am more then sure she will introduce herself *L*
Thank you guys and gals.. you make writting an absolute pleasure!!!
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