A Whispered Passion

[SuddenlyScottish]

I kissed Death’s lips
cold and barren they lay
whispered thy name
and he let me pass by.

I walked through battle fields
Watched men slowly die
Whispered thy name
And kept myself alive.

I held heaven’s hand
warm and gentle it felt
whispered thy name
and she stayed till the end of man.

And I will whisper thy name
You will be my one true love.

[John Barnett]

This is nice, dark and descriptive, very good, welcome back to Poet Club

[bloodredtears]

i agree...this piece was really good..and it is nice to see you posting again! your work is great!

[Hunter]

Very good.

[Eclipse]

this is such a beautiful piece. all the stanzas flow nicely together to a perfect ending. a lovely write, dark, but lovely all the same. I really enjoyed it. ^.^

[amberputis]

hey good piece, i thought it was really interesting, the style any way, but overall, nice.