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Post by hantigger on Apr 16, 2004 3:17:50 GMT -5
Lingering embrace. Blue arrow touch, Warm lips kiss life, Dark diamond moon, Gentle passion, Naked truth. Perfume tantalises, Beautiful embrace, Sleep whispers Sacred promises Entwined desires, Hunger lingers. Sea music caresses. Rose burns Skins flame, Bathe in blood, In the candle eye. My poetry website: www.geocities.com/han_tigger/HannahInglis.html
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 17, 2004 16:08:07 GMT -5
very intersting piece...good job
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Post by hantigger on Apr 18, 2004 6:40:52 GMT -5
Thanks!
Hannah.
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NeverMore
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Beethoven Looking f*g
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Post by NeverMore on Apr 18, 2004 13:02:22 GMT -5
I liked this and the style it is written in. Very catchy.
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Post by hantigger on Apr 19, 2004 3:25:17 GMT -5
Thanks 4 the input!
Hannah.
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